Thursday, March 31, 2011

Week 10, Theme 3

Prompt: Use Joe Brainard’s I Remember as a model. Let the phrase “I remember” work as an anaphora (the opening phrase), creating a formula, or a kind of container, for your writing, a mould to pour your prose into. Write twenty or more “I remember”s. Experiment with the length of sentences and memories you include; think about the series they make. Where do your “I remember”s begin, and where do they end?



I remember last night.


I remember choosing the orange pants.


I remember remembering how they didn’t fit before the illness.


I remember showing my room to freshmen as I ran out the door.


I remember wondering if they were intimidated by me.


I remember the bus ride to the bowling alley.


I remember ordering a gin and tonic.


I remember telling Sarah that I got “so into gin and tonics during my recent holiday in London.”


I remember spilling a whiskey sour on my orange pants. No stain.


I remember spilling a whiskey sour on a white dress. No shame.


I remember the hurried flurry of napkin patter to the lace of the dress.


I remember bowling a 34.


I remember spilling a drink in the gutter.


I remember choosing the pink bowling ball and laughing.


I remember not taking any photos with the birthday girl.


I don’t remember the bus ride home.


I don’t remember texting him.


I don’t remember taking off the whiskey orange pants.


I remember staring at the dim screen at 3am, scrolling through photos of people I’d seen at the alley, judging them.


I don’t want to remember crawling into bed, alone.

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